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Question:

What is the best way to combine the sentences in paragraph 1?

A Elements are the building blocks of matter. They are the simplest form of matter and cannot be further broken down using any chemical means. Elements make up everything we see. They come in solids, liquids, and gases and are arranged on the periodic table of elements.
explanation

As it is now, the first paragraph is somewhat choppy with short simple sentences and a lot of pronoun usage. To increase sentence style variety and remind the reader what they refers to, the revision combines sentences and deletes some of the repetitive pronoun usage (they) without creating any run-on sentences.

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