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What is the best way to revise the last sentence in paragraph 1?

A Put a period after the first recycle, and delete because and the last three words: In addition, charging for trash would make people think before they decide not to recycle. They would get tired of paying all that money and they would want to recycle more.

This sentence is important but it is too long and a bit redundant, so this is the best revision choice. The word because is used to attach a dependent phrase showing the cause of the first part of the sentence and not as the first word in a sentence.

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