What is the punctuation error in the first sentence of the third paragraph?

Find the usage error, if any, in the third paragraph.

The word affective should be effective.

The word affective refers to emotions. The word effective is correct here as it means "producing the desired effect."

Which parts of paragraph 4 should be deleted to make the paragraph less repetitive and more focused?

All of these

None of this information is essential to the paragraph message and their deletion would make the writing more concise and focused.

What is the correct spelling of todays in the first sentence of paragraph 2?
In todays world, we have so much garbage that the landfills are filling up fast.

today's

The apostrophe shows that the world belongs to today.

Find the error in the last sentence of paragraph 5.

The word their should be replaced with his or her.

This is the traditional grammar rule that is assessed in many current tests: "The subject, student, is singular, so it requires a singular pronoun." Since the gender of the student is unknown, his or her would be appropriate.
Please note, however, that there is a trend among current publishers of dictionaries and writing style guides to accept the use of a singular "they." Our advice to you, as a test-taker, is to look over all answer choices and, if there is another applicable answer choice, evaluate which error would be the most severe, in light of this information. In this particular question, this is the only applicable error. Since it is still considered an error by some grammar authorities, you would be advised not to choose "no error" in this case. You may also want to verify which rule is used by a particular test by referring to other prep materials.

Choose the correction that makes this sentence more clear to the reader: A person serving hours of community service should be a requirement for high school graduation.

Community service hours should be a requirement for high school graduation.

This answer choice provides the most effective and clear choice of words to communicate the idea. The other choices use too many words and are confusing to read.

Which sentence in paragraph (3) of the passage is unclear because of a sentence structure error?

A young person doing community service has another benefit of learning "people skills."

This sentence leads the reader to believe that the "benefit" is not people skills but is a benefit gained by learning people skills. Options for rewriting this sentence include Community service also helps a young person learn "people skills. and A young person can learn "people skills" by doing community service. This is a fine variation, but it impacts sentence clarity in an important way. The other error in this paragraph is not due to sentence structure but to word usage.

What is the correct punctuation for the space between the words made and sleeping in this sentence?
Here are some things that can be made sleeping bags, boxes, and toys.

:

Since the words *Here are some things..." indicates a list to come, a colon (:) is the appropriate punctuation.

Find the error in this sentence from the last paragraph: Parents have a rite to know what is going on concerning the health of their children.

The word rite should be spelled right.

This is the correct spelling for the word when used in this sentence. The word rite means a procedure or ritual. The other words are correct, as written.

Correct this sentence from the first paragraph to make its meaning more clear:
This should happen as long as the child has not declared themselves emancipated (legally independent) from the parent.

Change themselves to himself or herself.

A singular pronoun is needed to agree with the subject, the child. The other answer choices are neither necessary nor correctly used in this sentence.

What capitalization error needs to be corrected in the third paragraph?

The word Grandchildren should not be capitalized.

A family member word is not capitalized unless it is part of the person's name, as in Uncle Jimmy. Words for seasons are not capitalized. The word park is not capitalized unless it is part of a park's name, as in Lakefront Park.

Which sentence is the best choice to remove from the first paragraph?

If a child is emancipated, then parents should not be able to see medical records.

This sentence is too strongly on the opposite side of the argument presented and strays from the focus of the writer's position. The previous sentence is not as strong and only lists a condition that might affect the author's opinion. The other choice supports the author's position and should remain.