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Question:

Which sentence blurs the focus of the first paragraph and therefore should be deleted?

A Sentence 6
Explaination

This answer choice is correct because sentence 6 interrupts the first paragraph’s transition into the second paragraph. The writer has moved on from discussing movies to discussing music, which is the focus of the rest of the passage. When sentence 6 returns to a discussion of movies, it breaks up the flow and disorients the reader.