Essays will be graded on Focus, Organization, Development/Support, Sentence Structure, and Mechanics (Punctuation/Capitalization). Which one of these do you think needs the most revision in this response?

In the last two sentences of the essay, the writer briefly strays to the other side of the argument. When you write, there may be reasons you agree with the other side, but stick to the position you have taken throughout your essay. The essay organization, development, and support are all good.